In many English tests, the writing part of the test is not only the vocabulary and English expression ability, logical thinking is also an important inspection criteria.Turnds must be connected by logical clear language.If you cant connect well, but just pile the arguments and arguments together, even if the content and ideas of the article are excellent, it will make readers feel messy and lack of focus.Today Xueba Jun brought a dry product to everyone, teaching you how to connect with the simplest way.
Text ｜ Wei Jianfeng
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In major scoring standards written in the English test room, "coherent and connection" has always been a problem that makes many people feel a headache.To do a good job of connecting the article, we must pay attention to the logical relationship of sentences and paragraphs when writing.
English is a well -logic language.Observe carefully, you will find that English is followed by strict logical forms: the word, number, and style of the person who requires the words, numbers, and grids in the words;Connect.In the words, the theme sentences are highlighted and the paragraphs are expanded linearly.
For writing, a good article must follow the connection and coherence between the sentences and sentences, the paragraph and the paragraph.A good article is not the mechanical stack of sentences, but an organic whole, there is a rigorous logical relationship between the sentences and the sentence.Take a sentence that is not done well:
Every Summer, I Travel Abroad With my faamily or my best friend. s better. SO I Firmly BOLIEVE The BOOK is not the only source of Knowledge.
The above sentences read it because of lack of meaningful connection, but if this is rewritten,, Logic will be much tight:
Every Summer, I Travel Abroad With My Family or My Best Friends. tter. So I firmlyBeelieve Reading Books is not the only way of learning English; Foreign Travel Also Facilitates Language Learning.
The above words are reported by The Economist on the current status of the Internet.The original intention of the Internet was decentralized, but the Internet agreement was not complete at the beginning, resulting in many Internet basic services monopolized by giants.These giants are FAANG (Facebook, Amazon, Apple, Netflix, and Google), and in China are BAT (Baidu, Alibaba, Tencent).In the last sentence of the first sentence, "We Wouldn n’t Have Had All the Private Actors Rush Into the Void" refers to the basic service of the Internet giant monopoly (due to incomplete agreement).
The next author at the beginning of the second paragraph wrote an inverted sentence: And rush in they.The Private Actors mentioned earlier, through this form of "inverted+repeated verbs", the author cleverly realizes the natural connection of two paragraphs.
As can be seen from above, to write a clear logic article, we must pay special attention to the connection and coherent of the sentences and paragraphs.This requires us to use the connector and semantics.
The common connectives in writing include "BeCAUSE, AS, WHILE, IF, However, theREFORE, Although, Similaly, CONSEQUENTLY, NEVERTHESS" and so on.Most of these classmates are familiar with this type of connector and are often used them in normal times, but some connector should pay more attention when they are used.
(1) Do not confuse on the control/by contraast
on the contradCondition.For example:
there is, how many, no us calls for the overalrow of success, , The ussupported the colombians with armaments, finance and goodwill.
by contrast, for example: Rory is alway for work. by trast, Vicki is always lab. Here by Contrast cannot be written as on the control
(2) on the One Hand ... on the Other Hand
On the One Hand ... on the Other Hand is used to state two opposite views, not the two side -by -side views (you use on the one hand to intropule. at something.), For example:
On the One Hand, if the body doesnt have enough choleosterol, we will not be able to survive. On the Other Hand, if the body has too much choleosterol, the excess begins to like the arteries.
Semantic acceptance may be a strange way of connecting Chinese students., But it is very important.In fact, there is such one in the full score standard for the connection part of the IELTS test: USES Cohesion in Such A Way that It Attracts NoTtention It is not enough to connect the connection.Also use semantic acceptance.
Semantic acceptance refers to the text through the inheritance relationship between contexts, such as instructions and pronouns in the previous sentence.The contents of the past refer to the content, or the keywords that appear in the previous sentence are referred to and explained to form a natural undertaking relationship.Semantic acceptance is very common in authentic English. For example of new concept English 3:
(1) Recent Developments in Astronomy Have Made Made Made Made MadeIt posted to dernets in our owy way and in Other Galaxies. (2) this is a Major Achievement Ative terms, Planets Are Very Small and Do NOTEmit light. (3) Finding Planets is proving hard enough, But Finding Life on them Will Proinitely More nswer is who a plnet can actually support life. (5) In our own solar system, for exmple , Venus is far too and mars is far too, Strong> And Even Here it has taken more than the fire billion years for plant and animal life to evolve.
The beginning of the second sentence refers to the content of the first sentence.For common sentences, we can usually apply more in writing.At the beginning of the third sentence, the author uses Finding PRANETS is Proving Hard Enough to undertake the content of the second sentence, and then uses the connector but to turning to explain the difficulty of finding life on the external planet.The next four sentences explain the third sentence.The fifth sentence of the author uses For Example to give the content of the fourth sentence for example.At the beginning of the sixth sentence, the Earth Provides Ideal Conditions echoed the content of the fifth sentence.
It can be seen that the few sentences at the beginning are intertwined and the logic is very rigorous, and the author uses the instructions and nouns to connect the sentences, which is very natural to read.In reading, we can pay more attention to the semantic acceptance between sentences and sentences, and imitate more in writing, so as to continuously improve the connection and coherence of sentences.
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