December 20, 2024
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The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries.
【主體段分段】：按照 <性別> 分段
方法1：按照<圖例>分段 （本篇文章採用此種分段方法）
Body 1：綠色(recycling)+淺藍色(landfilling)
Body 2：其餘兩種方式
方法2：按照<國家>分段
Body 1：Netherlands
Body 2：其餘三個國家
開頭段
The bar chart compares the Netherlands, Italy, Spain and UK with regard to the waste treatment methods.
概述段
Overall, recycling isthe primary method of waste disposalin the Netherlands,whilelandfilling isthe dominant approachin the other three countries.
思路要點：
- Netherlands中，recycled佔比最高
- 剩下三個國家中，landfilled 佔比最高
Body paragraph 1
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that68% of the waste in the Netherlands is recycled,yetthis disposal technique is only used for no more than 20% of the waste in Italy, Spain and Britain. People in these three countriesput most of their waste intolandfilling sites,withthe British landfilling 65% of their waste, and Italians and Spanish people burying 40% of their waste.
思路要點：綠色(recycling)+淺藍色(landfilling)
- 綠色(recycling：Netherlands資料為68%，但剩下三個國家資料不足10%
- 淺藍色(landfilling)：Italy、Spain、Britain中landfilling資料都最高（UK→65%，Italy、Spain→40%）；Netherlands資料僅為8%
Body paragraph 2
By contrast, the differences inthe use of burning and chemical treatmentare less pronounced across the four countries. Burning isthe second favored choicein Spain and Italy,whereit accounts for 30% and 21% of waste disposal respectively. In the UK,however, only 3% of waste is incinerated, making it the least popular option there.As forchemical treatment, all four countriesmanage a similar proportion of waste in this way,with figures ranging from15%to18%.
思路要點：深藍色(burnt) + 橙色(used as chemicals)
- burnt、used as chemicals兩種方式 在四個國家間的資料差異不大
- 深藍色(burnt)：在Spain和Italy中資料排第二，分別為30%和21%；在UK資料最低，僅為3%
- 橙色(used as chemicals)：四個國家資料差異不大，區間範圍是從15%變化到18%
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