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The graph below gives information about household computer possession in one European country between 1997 and 2011.
【主體段分段】：
按照 <變化幅度> 分段
Body 1：黃色、橙色（變化幅度大）
Body 2：綠色、藍色（變化幅度小）
開頭段
The line chart compares changes in computer ownership per family in a country in Europe over the period from 1997 to 2011.
概述段
It is clear thatthe overall ownership of computers in this country generally increased.Also, for most of the years in the given period, families with at least 3 computers occupied the largest share.
思路要點：
- 電腦擁有量整體呈現上升趨勢（黃色下降，綠色、橙色上升）
- 大多數年份，擁有至少三臺電腦的家庭佔最大比重
Body paragraph 1
We can find thatin the initial year of the period, roughly half of the surveyed families did not have computers.Aftera period of fluctuations,this figurefell slightly to35% in 2005.In the next year,there emerged a sharp rise to41%,followed bya dramatic drop to 30% in 2007.The final 4 years witnessed a constant decrease by6 % in this figure.By contrast,the proportion of families with 2 computersalmost tripled to30% in the 14-year period, overtaking the figure for those with no computers in 2010.
思路要點：
- 黃色：第一年資料約為50%→隨後經歷波動→2005年小幅度下降到35%→2006年急劇上升到41%→2007年急劇下降到30%→隨後四年持續下降了6%
- 橙色：14年內幾乎上升了 3倍達到30%，其中在2010年超過黃色資料
Body paragraph 2
Such significant changes were not found in the rest two groups. In the original year,families with at least 3 computers made up the second largest group, accounting for 43%.Afterwards, this figurefluctuatedatapproximately 45%, exceeding the figure for families without computers in 2000.Similarly, the percentage of households with only one computerwas on a continuous increasein the given period,climbingfrom only 1% to 9%in the last year.
思路要點：綠色+藍色（變化幅度小）
- 綠色、藍色資料變化幅度較小
- 綠色：第一年資料排第二（43%）→隨後在45%左右 波動，其中在2000年超過黃色
- 藍色：持續上升，從1%最終達到9%
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