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The graph below shows changes in average monthly cost (euros)of four kinds of mobile contracts in a particular country in 2012.
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Body 1:藍色、橙色(數值高)
Body 2:灰色、黃色(數值低
開頭段
The line graph compares four cellphone plan providers in terms of their average monthly prices in a European country over a period of 9 months, starting from December in 2011 to August in 2012.
概述段
It is clear thatDemoremained to be the most expensive optionover the given period,whileETX wasthe most economical one.Also, the monthly cost of services provided by Demoexperienced the most remarkable growth.
思路要點:
- Demo(藍色)資料始終最高,ETS(黃色)資料始終最低
- Demo(藍色)資料變化幅度最大
Body paragraph 1
We can find thatpeople had to pay more if they signed a contract with Demo or Alpha.Originally,Demo charged €22 for their monthly plan,after whichthis figureunderwent a slight decrease by€2 in February.Subsequently,there emerged a significant rise tothe peak at €33 in July,before dropping marginallyto €30 in August.Likewise,the first month witnessed a modest fall inthe price of Alpha from €18 to €16.Afterminor fluctuations, this figuregrew noticeably to€26 by the end of the period.
思路要點:藍色、橙色(數值整體較高)
- 藍色、橙色資料整體較高
- Demo(藍色):一開始€22→2月小幅度下降了€2→7月顯著上升到€33→8月小幅度下降到€30
- Alpha(橙色):第一個月從€18小幅度下降到€16→隨後小幅度波動,到8月顯著上升到€26
Body paragraph 2
However, services provided by the other companies were relatively cheaper. With the price of €16, Silmranked the third placeamong the four providers in the beginning.Subsequently, this figuresaw a period of fluctuations, ranging from€12to€17.A similar trend could be foundin the charge of ETX plans.Starting at€8, its figuredeclined gradually to€6 in March.Afterwards, this figuremore than doubledin June,followed bya dramatic decrease to €8 in the end.
思路要點:灰色、黃色(數值整體較低)
- 灰色、黃色資料較低
- Silm(灰色):一開始排第三(€16)→隨後在€12 到€17範圍內波動
- ETX(黃色):一開始€8→隨後逐步下降,3月達到€6→隨後到6月翻倍→8月急劇下降到€8
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