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The chart below shows the share of total world production in three regions from 1840 to 2000.
【主體段分段】:按照 <變化幅度> 分段
Body 1:Asia、Europe(變化幅度較大)
Body 2:Rest of world(變化幅度較小)
開頭段
The bar chart demonstrates changes in production shares of Asia, Europe and the rest of the world between 1840 and 2000.
概述段
It is clear that for most time of the period, the rest of the world contributed the smallest share to global production, although this was the only region that experienced a steady increase over time.
思路要點:
- Rest of world資料一致最低
- 只有Rest of world資料整體呈現上升趨勢
Body paragraph 1
Initially, Asiadominated global production,accounting for52%.Aftera significant fallto 21% in 1960, this figuredoubledin 2000.By contrast, Europe’s production sharegrew graduallyfrom 38%to a peak of48% between 1840 and 1960,overtakingAsia’s share in 1980.The final 4 decades witnessed a dramatic dropin this figure by 20% in 2000.
思路要點:(藍色)Asia、(橙色)Europe
- (藍色)Asia:第一年資料最高,佔比52%→到1960年顯著下降到21%→到2000年漲了2倍
- (橙色)Europe:1840年為38%→持續上升,到1960達到48%,其中在1980年與Asia資料有交點→到2000年急劇下降了20%
Body paragraph 2
UnlikeAsia and Europe,such significant changesin productionwere not found inother areas of the world.Beginning at10% in 1840, the production share from the rest of the worldalmost tripledto 28% in 1880,after which there was a period of stabilityuntil 1920.Subsequently, this figureexperienced a slight climbby 2% over the last 80 years,surpassingAsia’s share in 1960.
思路要點:(黃色)Rest of world
- 變化幅度較小
- 1840年為10%→1880年幾乎上漲了3倍達到28%→到1920年保持平穩→到2000年小幅度上升了2%,其中1960年超過Asia的資料
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