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The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001.
【主體段分段】：
按照 <趨勢> 分段
Body 1：藍色、橙色（上升趨勢）
Body 2：綠色（下降趨勢）
開頭段
The line chart compares the number of enquiries to a visitor center made by three different channels in the first half of 2001.
概述段
It is clear thatface-to-face enquiries and those made by phone increased during the period,whileemail and postal enquiries gradually became less common.This trend was particularly evident in the case ofin-person enquiries, whichsaw the most noticeable increase.
思路要點：
- 藍色、橙色上升趨勢，綠色下降趨勢
- 橙色幅度最大
Body paragraph 1
Looking at the data in more detail, we can see that initially, 800 people made enquiries by telephone,twice the number ofthose visiting the information office in person.Aftera dip to 780 in February,the formerremained stablefor three months.Subsequently,there was a significant rise to the highest point at1100 in the last month.In comparison, the number of in-person enquiries followed a similar pattern, but showed a more significant growth rate—ittripledin the 6 month,exceeding the number ofphone enquiries in March.
思路要點：藍色、橙色(上升趨勢)
- 一月：藍色800，是橙色的2倍
- 藍色到二月小幅度下降→到四月保持平穩→六月達到最高值
- 橙色在六個月期間上漲了三倍，在三月超過藍色資料
Body paragraph 2
However, a contrasting trend can be observed inthe number of inquiries made via emails or letters.BeforeMarch, 600 people had contacted the tourist information center with their questions, a number thatwas surpassed byin-person inquiries in February.During the second quarter of the year,the number of email and letter inquiriesdropped significantly, reaching just 200 in June, making it the least preferred method for tourists.
思路要點：
綠色（下降趨勢）
- 綠色趨勢相反
- 前三個月保持平穩在600，在2月被橙色超過
- 4-6月顯著下降到200
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