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The bar charts below shows the percentage of males and females enjoying the leisure time from 1996 to 2006, and the percentage of males and females going to different places in 2006.
分段方法：一圖一段
Body 1：圖1（動態圖）
Body 2：圖2（靜態圖）
開頭段
The bar charts illustrate changes in the proportions of men and women spending their leisure time between 1996 and 2006, as well as a comparison of their preferences for visiting five different recreational destinations in 2006.
概述段
Overall,the gender gap inleisure time participationhad narrowedbetween 1996 and 2006,witha significant increasein the proportion of women enjoying their leisure time.However, the types of leisure activities preferred by men and womendiffered considerablyin 2006.
思路要點：
- 1996-2006年間，男女差距縮小，其中女生資料顯著上升
- 2006年，男女偏好的活動種類不同
Body paragraph 1
It is clear that althoughmoremales enjoyed leisure timecompared tofemales throughout the period, the proportion of malesfell remarkablyfrom 85% in 1996 to 62% in 2006.In contrast, the percentage of females who enjoyed leisure timemore than doubledto 61% in 2006,almost matching the figure formales.
思路要點：圖1
- 三年中males>females，但males資料從1996年但85%顯著下降到2006年到62%
- 對比而言，females資料上漲兩倍多達到2006年到61%，幾乎和males資料持平
Body paragraph 2
Regardingthe percentage of people spending their leisure time in various places, going to the beachwas the most popular activityfor both genders, with 30% of females and 25% of males opting to relax by the sea.In contrast, KTV wasmuch less favored, since only 15% of males and a mere 13% of females preferred to go there. Both gendersshared similar interests tomuseums, with the figure of roughly 19%. Pop centers and cinemasdemonstrated notable gender differencesin participation rates.Specifically, the former attracted 30% of males,twice the figure forfemales.However, cinemas were only chosen by 10% of males,significantly lower thanthe 25% of females who preferred this activity.
思路要點：圖2(靜態圖)
- beach男女資料都最高（females佔比30%，males佔比25%）
- KTV男女資料都較低（males佔比15%，females佔比13%）
- Museums男女資料相似，大約為19%
- Pop center、cinema男女差距大
- Pop center：males佔比30%，是females的2倍
- cinema：males佔比10%，遠低於females資料(25%)
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